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aN - only haxball promo #24

PostPosted: January 29th, 2020, 10:58 pm
by Laki


I just wanna point out, it's my first official promo made. I'm basically just learning makin' promos like this.


I really want to hear ur feedback about it.

Re: aN - only haxball promo #24

PostPosted: January 29th, 2020, 11:24 pm
by Allen
can u make bar mitzva videos as well?

Re: aN - only haxball promo #24

PostPosted: January 29th, 2020, 11:26 pm
by Laki
solace wrote:can u make bar mitzva videos as well?

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Re: aN - only haxball promo #24

PostPosted: January 29th, 2020, 11:28 pm
by LaggerMet
3 seasons late

Re: aN - only haxball promo #24

PostPosted: January 29th, 2020, 11:31 pm
by Eren
It could have been better with more colors imo.
And i also think its a shame that a movie of aN doesnt contain clips of their founders.

But + for the effort.

Re: aN - only haxball promo #24

PostPosted: January 29th, 2020, 11:32 pm
by Laki
Eren wrote:It could have been better with more colors imo.
And i also think its a shame that a movie of aN doesnt contain clips of their founders.

But + for the effort.


If i had the recs with all of the ssn that they played in, i'd defo put them in.

Re: aN - only haxball promo #24

PostPosted: January 30th, 2020, 12:02 am
by TemplleGoku
I didn't watch the full video but the video quality is a 10/10

Re: aN - only haxball promo #24

PostPosted: January 30th, 2020, 10:15 am
by eleven
Things I don't like:

- Colors (there should be more difference between blues and reds)
- Zoom (way too much, it can be good for 10/15 seconds but I wouldn't see a 4/5 mins movie with that zoom)
- Images (they look not high definited, maybe for the program you use for recordings)

Start trying to fix this

Re: aN - only haxball promo #24

PostPosted: January 30th, 2020, 6:56 pm
by Whiplash
that emotional zoom at the end :heart:

- transitions are clear and smooth, although it's kinda boring at some point since it's repetitive.
- if you are gonna work on black & white, play with the contrast and tones a little, so that i can look much better.
- you could maybe try to use some blur effect with tricks and fakes etc.

overall, a good first video. keep it up!